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7. One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

7. One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 75EM5
The relevance of museums in this technological world has become a controversial topic. For so many decades, museums have played a significant role in treasuring the artefacts and knowledge of ancient cultures and traditions. However, some people take the view that museums are useless as all this information is easily accessible on various websites. I beg to differ from this standpointTo begin with, it is indubitable that there are different websites that offer copious details regarding the different eras. Besides, anyone can easily see the vivid images of different kinds of paintings, antiques, and sculptures of yesteryears. For instance, if one needs to know anything about Indian history, there are innumerable websites that offer insights into it. Consequently, some people feel it is just a waste. of time and energy to visit museums to gather knowledge. Nevertheless, the internet cannot substitute museums. Museums are the places where things related to our heritage are preserved with great care. Without proper care, these things can be damaged, lost or misused. Hence, it is better to keep them in museums for public display. Besides, it is a great source of knowledge for school it is a great source of knowledge for school children as history is a mandatory part of their curriculum. Children are more likely to believe in the things which they see in front of them. Hence, many schools organize trips to museums to aware them of their roots. Additionally, it must also be kept in mind that there are a lot of websites that give deceiving and inaccurate details. Therefore, to get accurate details regarding an era, Therefore, to get accurate details regarding an era, we need to visit museums. Having discussed the topic in detail, I would like to conclude that even though the importance of museums has diminished but still, these play a consequential role in society. These serve as a secure place to preserve our heritage and give precise details to the visitors.
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in this technological world has become a controversial topic. For
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decades,
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have played a significant role in treasuring the
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and knowledge of ancient cultures and traditions.
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are useless as all this information is
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the vivid images of
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kinds of paintings, antiques, and sculptures of
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a waste.
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to gather

knowledge.

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, the internet cannot substitute
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.
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are the places where things related to our heritage
are preserved
with great care. Without proper care, these things can
be damaged
, lost or misused.
Hence
, it is better to
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them in
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for public display.
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in front of them.
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,
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schools organize trips to
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to aware them of their roots.
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, it
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also
be
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in mind that there are
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.
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, to
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accurate
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regarding an era,
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, to
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accurate
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regarding an era, we need to visit museums.

Having discussed the topic in
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, I would like
to conclude
that
even though
the importance of
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museums
has diminished
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still
, these play a consequential role in society. These serve as a secure place to preserve our heritage and give precise
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to the visitors.
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IELTS letter 7. One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

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326 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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