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1. How can you look after your health?

1. How can you look after your health? 1bNdL
Hello everyone, my name is Phuong Anh and today we will be talking about health. In the past, there were many ways to take care of health. On the strength of medicinal resources, Vietnamese people have accumulated long-standing experiences in using plants and animals as medicine, contributing to the formation of a great treasure of knowledge with its own identity. of each ethnic group and region. In addition, people also use other methods such as acupuncture, massage, . . . to take care of their health effectively and best. People have many bad habits that make their health increasingly weak. Typically, there are many people who are inactive, do sports, do not eat enough, eat enough meals or eat too much junk food, fast food, or smoke and drink alcohol. In addition, staying up too late, using too many electronic devices will also make health worse. Therefore, to maintain good health, we need to drink enough 2-3 liters of water a day, eat three meals a day, eat enough quality, exercise regularly and sleep enough 7-8 hours a day, not sleep too late. Not only that, but also need to avoid eating fatty and fatty foods and should not smoke, drink alcohol. Keeping healthy is very important because with good health, we will rarely get sick and will feel more useful and comfortable life.
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we will be talking about health.

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ways to take care of
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. On the strength of medicinal resources, Vietnamese
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people
have accumulated long-standing experiences in using plants and animals as medicine, contributing to the formation of a great treasure of knowledge with its
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own
identity.
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other methods such as acupuncture, massage
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habits that
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increasingly
weak.
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who are inactive, do sports, do not
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enough
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too much junk food,
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food, or smoke and drink alcohol.
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electronic devices will
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, we need to drink
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2-3 liters of water a day,
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three meals a day,
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quality, exercise
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and sleep
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7-8 hours a day, not sleep too late. Not
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that,
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need to avoid eating fatty and fatty foods and should not smoke, drink alcohol.

Keeping healthy is
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important
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, we will rarely
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sick and will feel more useful and comfortable life.
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IELTS letter 1. How can you look after your health?

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  American English
5 paragraphs
224 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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