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Write a letter to your friend about overseas trip

Write a letter to your friend about overseas trip 9B0P3
Dear Sarah and John, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am grateful to both of you for being such amazing hosts while I stayed in Goa. The trip was awesome and it can be easily depicted in the pictures that you have shared. I really miss the holiday and wish if we can have one more soon. I am really sorry that I could not write earlier. Actually, I was swamped due to my office work and hence could not reach out. There was a stringent deadline at work which had to be completed at any cost. Now that I am free, I would love to make a plan with you two. I would like to invite you to my city i. e. Delhi and stay here. We will go to visit some famous monuments, gardens, markets and much more. This trip would be worth it! Do try to make it here and the leave the rest on me. Hoping to see you both soon. Your lovingly, Karan Bhardwaj
Dear Sarah and John,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am grateful to both of you for being such amazing hosts while I stayed in Goa. The trip was awesome and it can be
easily
depicted in the pictures that you have shared. I
really
miss the holiday and wish if we can have one more
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soon
.

I am
really
sorry that I could not write earlier. Actually, I
was swamped
due to my office work and
hence
could not reach out. There was a stringent deadline at work which had to
be completed
at any cost.

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Now
that I am free, I would
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love
to
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make
a plan with you two. I would like to invite you to my city
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i. e.
Delhi and stay here. We will go to visit
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some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
monuments, gardens, markets and much more. This trip would be worth it! Do try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it here and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
the rest on me.

Hoping to
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see
you both
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soon
.

Your
lovingly
,

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Karan
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Bhardwaj
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about overseas trip

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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