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Rented unfinished flat and purchases secound hand furniture

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing the letter to ask or to inquire to availability of the furniture item. Well let me describe what exactly I need so you can help me. As I owned wooden chair at the time my bad in it has not been keeping that useful does I thought to buy a new chair even more I need double bad with some wooden stools for my guest. I would be really thankful to you if you could please let me know wheather could hour items would be there or no. In this sence I would like to buy all items in your stall. With this I would be really greatfull to you if you put charges of the same. Moreover if any discount applied it would really apprecialely that I waiting for your response. Your faithful Shraddha patel
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing the letter to ask or to inquire to availability of the furniture item.

Well
let
me
describe
what exactly I need
so
you can
help
me. As I
owned
wooden chair at the time my
bad
in it has not been keeping that useful
does
I
thought
to
buy
a new chair even more I need double
bad
with
some
wooden stools for my guest.

I would be
really
thankful to you if you could
please
let
me know
wheather
could hour items would be there or no. In this
sence
I would like to
buy
all items in your stall.

With this I would be
really
greatfull
to you if you put charges of the same.
Moreover
if any discount applied it would
really
apprecialely
that
I waiting
for your response.

Your faithful Shraddha
patel
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IELTS letter Rented unfinished flat and purchases secound hand furniture

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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