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Complaint about poor service

Complaint about poor service X78rY
Dear sir or madamI am writing to register a complain regarding poor service and unsatisfactory help from your employees. I had visited your store on last monday to purchasing microwave oven for my home. When i was in your shop, no one employees approached me and assistance me for purchasing product. I show all employees was busy to watch comedy show on television. No one was ready to help me or assistance me for product. I am shocked when i was asked about product to one of them, he pointed out his fingure to another employee and showed me that he is not intrested to help me, this gesture was awkward. I am hopping that you would be take a proper action on this. Your faithfully Krunal patel
Dear sir or
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madamI
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am
writing to register a
The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?
complain
regarding poor service and unsatisfactory
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help
from your employees.

I had visited your store on last
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monday
to purchasing microwave oven for my home. When
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was in your shop, no one employees approached me and assistance me for purchasing product. I
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show
all employees was busy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
comedy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
on television. No one was ready to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me or assistance me for product. I
am shocked
when
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was asked
about product to one of them, he pointed out his
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fingure
to another employee and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
me that he is not
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intrested
to
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help
me, this gesture was awkward.

I am hopping that you would be
Consider using a past participle here: "taken".
take
a proper action on this. Your
faithfully
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Krunal
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patel
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IELTS letter Complaint about poor service

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
127 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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