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1. Asking for Information You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

Dear Ali, Hello, and I hope this email finds you well, I am writing you to express my deep sorrow of breaking down your statue you lent me, actually, I was very careful with your precious property, but as I have put in the upper shelves, my curious son, Wihan, took a chair and grabbed it to see what it looks like, since I entered to the room, as he was surprised, loose his control and dropped your statue, since I know it was very vulnerable memory of your father, I really cant compensate, but I am going to buy you the gold statue instead of your silver one. although it was total accident, I hope you forgive me due to this matter and I am sure your kind heart is more generous to accept my apology again. Wish you all the best, Abouzar
Dear Ali, Hello, and I hope this email finds you well, I am writing you to express my deep sorrow of breaking down your statue you lent me, actually, I was
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careful with your precious property,
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but
as I have put in the upper shelves, my curious son,
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Wihan
, took a chair and grabbed it to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
what it looks like, since I entered to the room, as he
was surprised
,
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loose
his control and dropped your statue, since I know it was
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very
vulnerable memory of your father, I
really
Did you mean “can’t” or “cannot”?
cant
compensate,
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but
I am going to
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buy
you the gold statue
instead
of your silver one.
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although
it was total accident, I hope you forgive me due to this
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matter and
I am sure your kind heart is more generous to accept my apology again.

Wish you all the best,
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Abouzar
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IELTS letter 1. Asking for Information You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
143 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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