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1. Asking for Information You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

Dear Mark, Hello, and I hope this email finds you well, My name is Abouzar, and I recently moved to England, as I read your Ads in weekly local newspapers, you intend to hire a limited number of volunteers, as I am delightfully eager to participate in your program, and this would give me the opportunity to develop my language and culture insight, and also the sense of humanity in my new home, I am totally ready to be a part of your team. and as I read your qualifications, I think I am well suited to your project, and I hope my leadership, team-friendly, and last but not least, rapid backup and procurement skills, could be beneficial on this occasion. indeed at the moment, I am totally free, as my next semester will be started in 3 weeks, and during this period, I am pleased to be a part of the managers and plan team, both via virtual platforms or being physically present from 9: 00 a. m to 3: 00 p. m from Mondays to Fridays. Sincerely yours
Dear Mark, Hello, and I hope this email finds you well, My name is
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Abouzar
, and I recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to England, as I read your Ads in weekly local newspapers, you intend to hire a limited number of volunteers, as I am
delightfully
eager to participate in your program, and this would give me the opportunity to develop my language and culture insight, and
also
the sense of humanity in my new home, I am
totally
ready to be a part of your team.
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and
as I read your qualifications, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I am well suited to your project, and I hope my leadership, team-friendly, and last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not least, rapid backup and procurement
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, could be beneficial on this occasion.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
indeed
at the moment, I am
totally
free, as my
next
semester will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
in 3 weeks, and during this period, I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to be a part of the managers and plan team, both via virtual platforms or being
physically
present from 9: 00 a. m to 3: 00 p. m from Mondays to Fridays.

Sincerely
yours

IELTS letter 1. Asking for Information You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

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6.0
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