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You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who you are give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

Dear sir, My name is John. I'm living one apartment in nearest your supermarket. I Had been the regular customer for your supermarket. Now I'm writing this letter for complain regards. Yesterday I was come your supermarket with my grandmother. We have to need some clay pots. So my grandma went to the 1st floor via staircase And bring some clay pots. She is very old, so she was stumbled and struggled to not fall on the staircase at the landing time. But the clay pots are fall down and everything was broken. That was a good time, nothing happened to my grandma. Hereby I had some money lossed. But money isn't a matter. What would you do if my grandmother's life was danger? So I want to say some suggestions for you. Some handicap people and old age people are struggling to pick up on the 1st floor goods in your supermarket. Because you have only staircase. If you will make one or two lifts, these kind of people easy to take on the 1st floor goods. Otherwise you will must make one escalator. Hereby you can be prevent these kind of issues. I hope you will make the change in your supermarket. Thank you. Yours faithfully, John.

Dear sir,

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Now
 I'm writing this letter for complain regards.

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come
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have to
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some
 clay pots. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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some
 clay pots. She is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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 and struggled to not fall on the staircase at the landing time. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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. That was a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 time, nothing happened to my grandma. Hereby I had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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lossed
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 money isn't a matter. What would you do if my grandmother's life was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardrisk
danger
? This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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some
 suggestions for you.

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Some
 handicap This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 age This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are struggling to pick up on the 1st floor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 in your supermarket. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 staircase. If you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 one or two lifts, ‘These’ does not seem to match the singular noun ‘kind’. Did you mean “this kind” or “these kinds”?this kindthese kinds
these kind
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 easy to take on the 1st floor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Otherwise,
Otherwise
 you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 one escalator. Hereby you can be Consider using the past participle “prevented”.prevented
prevent
‘These’ does not seem to match the singular noun ‘kind’. Did you mean “this kind” or “these kinds”?this kindthese kinds
these kind
 of issues. I hope you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in your supermarket. Thank you.

Yours faithfully
,

John. 