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You ha a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the news paper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting

Dear Editor, I would like to share the experience of our family to a Japanese Restaurant we have eaten last week. The name of the food place is “Tempera” and it I located in Jupiter Streets, Makati. It is beside Lucky Mall and at the back of Win Hotel. We have ordered Shoyu Ramen which the chef highly recommend. The blend of noodles and pork was superb. It was almost the same as the ramen we have tried in Japan in our visit last year. The gyoza was also worth to try as it perfectly match with the ramen in order to balance the taste. Luckily we also met the owner during our visit and he advised that the restaurant open last month and he still consider their current operation as a soft opening. Full blast operation will start next month. Considering the price of the food and the ambiance which gives the feeling that you are in Japan, I highly recommend the place to you and to your avid reader. I guarantee it is worth the try. Yours Sincerely, Mark Lester Marte

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IELTS letter You ha a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the news paper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

182 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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