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You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who you are give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

Dear Sir or Madam, Two days ago I went to your supermall to do some shopping and got injured by a minor accident. I am writing to inform you how this accident took place and what you can do to prevent such accidents in the future. I am hoping that you would take steps so that no other shopper fall victim to similar incidents. I am Shahin Shah and I live a few blocks away from your supermall. I have been a loyal customer to your business for more than 4 years. In relation to the specifics of the event, I went to your store to buy some fresh vegetables and fruits on 27th September at around 7: 30 pm. Just after I took a shopping cart, a woman with her groceries collided with me. I cannot say that it was entirely her fault as she was over 70 years old and sufficient light was not present at that corner of the mall. In addition, the floor was slippery. So, this unavoidable accident occurred as the lack of attention by your management. Though this was a minor accident, it could have been worse! Hundreds of people, including children and senior citizens go shopping to your mall every day. It is your responsibility to maintain this place to avoid such a mishap. Please arrange more electric bulbs at that corner of your shop and dry the wet floor immediately to avoid the unexpected accidents. I hope you will give immediate attention to this matter. Yours faithfully, Shahin Shah

Dear Sir or Madam,

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. I am writing to inform you how this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisastermishapcalamitysetbackhazardpileup
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 took place and what you can do to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
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accidents
 in the future. I am hoping that you would take steps This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 that no other shopper fall victim to similar incidents.

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 have been a loyal customer to your business for more than 4 years.

In relation to the specifics of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
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, I went to your store to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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some
 fresh vegetables and fruits on 27th September at around 7: 30 pm. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 after I took a shopping cart, a woman with her groceries collided with me. I cannot say that it was entirely
 her fault as she was over 70 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and sufficient light was not present at that corner of the mall. In addition
, the floor was slippery. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, this unavoidable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisastermishapcalamitysetbackhazardpileup
accident
 occurred as the lack of attention by your management. Though this was a minor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisastermishapcalamitysetbackhazardpileup
accident
, it could have been worse!

Hundreds of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, including children and senior citizens go shopping to your mall every day. It is your responsibility to maintain this place to avoid such a mishap. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 arrange more electric bulbs at that corner of your shop and dry the wet floor immediately to avoid the unexpected accidents.

I hope you will give immediate attention to this matter.

Yours faithfully
,

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Shahin
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