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07/11/2017A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and g v.1

07/11/2017A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and g v. 1
Dear Sarah, I am writing to inform you I will not be able to meet you at the train station. However, I have made all arrangements to make you arrival convenient. A set of keys to my house I am going to give to my neighbor Mrs. Smith. She usually spends all day in her garden; so, you may take the keys from her. There are three keys and the biggest one is used to open the entrance door. The lock has a secret and to open it you will need to turn it once on the left and then three times on the right. You can get to my place by public transport. In front of the train station, a bus stop is located, you should take a bus number four and then get off at the fifth stop. When you left the coach, you should turn around and my house will be right in front of you. Another way to get to the destination is to take a taxi cab but this ride may cost you a small fortune. I will return to the city at 10: 00 pm on the day of your arrival. On my way home I will purchase a tasty pizza and some wine. So, we will have a decent dinner. Then if you want, we can watch your favorite movie on DVD. See you soon. Your brother Eugene.
Dear Sarah,

I am writing to inform you I will not be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you at the train station.
However
, I have made all arrangements to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you arrival convenient. A set of keys to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
I am going to give to my neighbor Mrs. Smith. She
usually
spends all day in her garden;
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, you may take the keys from her. There are three keys and the biggest one is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to open the entrance door. The lock has a secret and to open it you will need to turn it once on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
and then three times on the right.

You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to my place by public transport. In front of the train station, a bus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
is located
, you should take a bus number four and then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
off at the fifth
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
. When you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
the coach, you should turn around and my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
will be right in front of you. Another way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to the destination is to take a taxi cab
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this ride may cost you a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
fortune.

I will return to the city at 10: 00 pm on the day of your arrival. On my way home I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
a tasty pizza and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
wine.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, we will have a decent dinner. Then if you want, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
your favorite movie on DVD.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Your brother Eugene.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS letter 07/11/2017A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and g v. 1

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
235 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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