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You’ve received a survey from the city council asking you to indicate your preference regarding two approaches to tackling the mosquito issues during the summer. Option A – Release dragonflies – they will eat the mosquitoes thereby controlling the population. Option B – Pour chemicals into the standing water where mosquitos breed, thereby killing the larvae

You’ve received a survey from the city council asking you to indicate your preference regarding two approaches to tackling the mosquito issues during the summer. Option A – Release dragonflies – they will eat the mosquitoes thereby controlling the population. Option B – Pour chemicals into the standing water where mosquitos breed, thereby killing the larvae XDnrq
Having lots of large fearless mosquitoes all over our city during the summer is causing many of our residents to stay at home. However, while getting rid of mosquitoes is a top priority, contaminating the environment is an unacceptable side effect. I think that releasing dragonflies would be the most environmentally friendly solution as they would efficiently cull the mosquito population without adding chemicals. Since the beginning of the summer, many people, including my children, have assumed unhealthy sedentary lifestyles rather than the active healthy lives typically associated with the summer months. The fear of being bitten by jumbo-sized mosquitoes keeps them inside sitting motionless in front of movies and computer games. We have tried several natural mosquito repellents including spraying the liquid from boiled garlic, growing lavender, and emptying standing water, but nothing has worked. Although a more drastic solution is required, using chemicals could potentially contaminate our water sources and adversely affect both the community and the environment. Dragonflies offer an eco-friendlier solution. Hopefully, after weighing up the serious consequences of chemicals and the advantages of using dragonflies for both residents and the environment, you will decide to use dragonflies to resolve our mosquito issue.
Having lots of large fearless
mosquitoes
all over our city during the summer is causing
many
of our residents to stay at home.
However
, while getting rid of
mosquitoes
is a top priority, contaminating the environment is an unacceptable side effect. I
think
that releasing
dragonflies
would be the most
environmentally
friendly solution as they would
efficiently
cull the
mosquito
population without adding chemicals.

Since the beginning of the summer,
many
people
, including my children, have assumed unhealthy sedentary lifestyles
rather
than the active healthy
lives
typically
associated with the summer months. The fear of
being bitten
by jumbo-sized
mosquitoes
keeps
them inside sitting motionless in front of movies and computer games.

We have tried several natural
mosquito
repellents including spraying the liquid from boiled garlic, growing lavender, and emptying standing water,
but
nothing has worked. Although a more drastic solution
is required
, using chemicals could
potentially
contaminate our water sources and
adversely
affect both the community and the environment.
Dragonflies
offer an
eco-friendlier
solution.

Hopefully
, after weighing up the serious consequences of chemicals and the advantages of using
dragonflies
for both residents and the environment, you will decide to
use
dragonflies
to resolve our
mosquito
issue.
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IELTS essay You’ve received a survey from the city council asking you to indicate your preference regarding two approaches to tackling the mosquito issues during the summer. Option A – Release dragonflies – they will eat the mosquitoes thereby controlling the population. Option B – Pour chemicals into the standing water where mosquitos breed, thereby killing the larvae

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