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introduce about youself, your strength and drawbacks and your effective way of learning English

introduce about youself, your strength and drawbacks and your effective way of learning English 8xaql
My name is Ngoc Mai – a senior at Hanoi Law University and my major is Economic Law. I was born and raised in Haiduong where is a lovely small city until I moved to Hanoi to enter university in 2018. My friends say that I am a sensitive person which means I have a clear and detailing view at everything around me. I think this could be my strength because I always pay attention and try my best in what I have to do so I rarely make small mistakes due to carelessness. This makes me relized that the more meticulous I work the better the result is. Being sensetive also makes me a good listener and my friends always can share their with me when it is needed. that is why I have never got trouble in communicating even when I am not a sociable person. However, the sensitive is also my weakness. Because of this, my emotion and decisions are easily effected by the other's oppinions that leads to the confusion of myself. I can not deny that learning English is one of my favorite activities. The most effective way I have ever tried is to learn from English movies and I highly recommend "Friends" - an interesting American comedy series. Through the films, English is no more a subject, it is something entertaining and also containing a culture.
My name is
Ngoc
Mai
a senior at Hanoi Law University and my major is Economic Law. I
was born
and raised in
Haiduong
where is a lovely
small
city until I
moved
to Hanoi to enter university in 2018. My friends say that I am a sensitive person which means I have a
clear
and detailing view at everything around me. I
think
this could be my strength
because
I always pay attention and try my best in what I
have to
do
so
I rarely
make
small
mistakes due to carelessness. This
makes
me
relized
that the more meticulous I work the better the result is. Being
sensetive
also
makes
me a
good
listener and my friends always can share their with me when it
is needed
.
that
is why I have never
got
trouble in communicating even when I am not a sociable person.
However
, the sensitive is
also
my weakness.
Because of this
, my emotion and decisions are
easily
effected by the other's
oppinions
that leads to the confusion of myself. I can not deny that learning English is one of my favorite activities. The most effective way I have ever tried is to learn from English movies and I
highly
recommend
"
Friends
"
-
an interesting American comedy series. Through the films, English is no more a subject, it is something entertaining and
also
containing a culture.
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IELTS essay introduce about youself, your strength and drawbacks and your effective way of learning English

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
232 words
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