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You've learnt about 4 means in which we process information: auditory, visual, kinesthetic and digital.

You've learnt about 4 means in which we process information: auditory, visual, kinesthetic and digital. 75WqY
First of all, we know 4 types of perception: visual, auditory, digital and kinesthetic. Each person identifies with a type of perception, but in my opinion, we will identify with each mean depending on the situation, the place or the way of thinking at that moment. I would be a digital and visual person. I like that everything makes sense and know their true meaning. Secondly, I used to analyze a moment, situation or image and their relationship. Sometimes, I like to look closely at something and focus only on what I see. This is so efficient for a global vision. In summary, everyone need this 4 means to process complete and detailed information.
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First of all
, we know 4 types of perception: visual, auditory, digital and kinesthetic. Each person identifies with a type of perception,
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but
in my opinion, we will identify with each mean depending on the situation, the place or the way of thinking at that moment. I would be a digital and visual person. I like that everything
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
sense and know their true meaning.
Secondly
, I
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used
to analyze a moment, situation or image and their relationship.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
, I like to look
closely
at something and focus
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only
on what I
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see
. This is
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so
efficient for a global vision. In summary, everyone need this 4 means to process complete and detailed information.
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IELTS essay You've learnt about 4 means in which we process information: auditory, visual, kinesthetic and digital.

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