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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your university is planning to film all large lecture classes and put them on the university website. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Your university is planning to film all large lecture classes and put them on the university website. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. eEyPB
It is not an exaggeration that we are living more complex lives than the few decades due to the advent of IT technology. Although our lives became harder to get adapted, once we understand and can utilize the system well, we can live a higher quality of life than before. One of the main results of this appearance of IT technology is that we can watch some sources, including educational videos and lectures, online. According to this, some of the educational centers or universities are uploading their videos on their websites which they have filmed while the large lecture classes were in progress. However, in my perspective, I believe that this must not happen because it contains various problems. Thus, I disagree with today’s statement and I will explore more for the reasons in the following essay. Initially, students who did not pay for the lecture can study with the film uploaded on the website at any time at anywhere and this is one of the biggest problems. As many people are aware, most of the universities’ websites are open to people who are not even engaged with the university. This means that they can freely access invaluable resources and information, especially for those lecture classes. The point here is that they did not pay anything for the universities to use those data. Students who participated in the big lecture classes paid an incredible amount of money. This is truly unfair for the students who have paid for the lecture. I strongly believe that no one can accept this kind of situation. In addition to this, students engaged with the class need to wake up early in the morning and be prepared to go to university because many classes are scheduled in the early morning usually. In contrast, others will not undergo this. On top of that, students and the professor may not fully concentrate on the lecture if they recognize that the class is being filmed. They will, with a high percentage, be pressured by the camera recording and what they are doing can be exposed to unspecified people -anyone who watches the uploaded video. I can take myself as an example. When I was attending secondary school, my whole class was happened to be recorded, as an advertisement for the school. Since my classmates, my teacher and I never have encountered this kind of thing, we were really nervous. I kept sitting politely and still. Due to this, I was not able to concentrate on the class. Unfortunately, I was not the only case for this. Even my teacher became anxious and was not stable. Her voice vibrated rapidly. As a result, on that day, no one in the class was able to fully concentrate on what we were doing. To encapsulate, it is hard to say which choice, whether agree or disagree, is the right thing to choose. Everyone has everyone’s taste. With this in mind, for my taste, I disagree with the statement. This is because uploading the lecture on the university’s website can be unfair for the students who have paid for the class, and there is a possibility that people in the lecture room cannot entirely focus on what they are doing.
It is not an exaggeration that we are living more complex
lives
than the few decades due to the advent of IT technology. Although our
lives
became harder to
get
adapted, once we understand and can utilize the system well, we can
live
a higher quality of life than
before
. One of the main results of this appearance of IT technology is that we can
watch
some
sources, including educational videos and
lectures
, online. According to this,
some of the
educational centers or
universities
are uploading their videos on their websites which they have filmed while the large
lecture
classes
were in progress.
However
, in my perspective, I believe that this
must
not happen
because
it contains various problems.
Thus
, I disagree with
today
’s statement and I will explore more for the reasons in the following essay.

Initially
,
students
who
did not pay for the
lecture
can study with the film uploaded on the
website
at any time at anywhere and this is one of the biggest problems. As
many
people
are aware, most of the
universities’
websites are open to
people
who
are not even engaged with the
university
. This means that they can
freely
access invaluable resources and information,
especially
for those
lecture
classes
. The point here is that they did not pay anything for the
universities
to
use
those data.
Students
who
participated in the
big
lecture
classes
paid an incredible amount of money. This is
truly
unfair for the
students
who
have paid for the
lecture
. I
strongly
believe that no one can accept this kind of situation.
In addition
to this,
students
engaged with the
class
need to wake up early in the morning and
be prepared
to go to
university
because
many
classes
are scheduled
in the early morning
usually
.
In contrast
, others will not undergo this.

On top of that
,
students
and the professor may not
fully
concentrate on the
lecture
if they recognize that the
class
is
being filmed
. They will, with a high percentage,
be pressured
by the camera recording and what they are doing can
be exposed
to unspecified
people
-anyone
who
watches
the uploaded video. I can take myself as an example. When I was attending secondary school, my whole
class
was happened
to
be recorded
, as an advertisement for the school. Since my classmates, my teacher and I never have encountered this kind of thing, we were
really
nervous. I
kept
sitting
politely
and
still
. Due to this, I was not able to concentrate on the
class
. Unfortunately, I was not the
only
case for this. Even my teacher became anxious and was not stable. Her voice vibrated
rapidly
.
As a result
, on that day, no one in the
class
was able to
fully
concentrate on what we were doing.

To encapsulate, it is
hard
to say which choice, whether
agree
or disagree, is the right thing to choose. Everyone has everyone’s taste. With this in mind, for my taste, I disagree with the statement. This is
because
uploading the
lecture
on the
university’s
website
can be unfair for the
students
who
have paid for the
class
, and there is a possibility that
people
in the
lecture
room cannot
entirely
focus on what they are doing.
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IELTS essay Your university is planning to film all large lecture classes and put them on the university website. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay
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4 paragraphs
538 words
6.0
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