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The illustration below illustrates the traditional method of manufacturing coffee beans. Including twelve different steps as sorting the beans by hand, cleaning them, then drying, grading and selling. The process begins with sorting each beans one by one and ends with selling the packaged roasted beans. In the initial phase, sorted coffee beans must be cleaned cleanly and then dried outside for four weeks. During this duration workers rake and turn the coffee by special tool in order to dry all of them equally. Subsequently after 28 days, beans are sorted in silos and sent to the mill where it is hulled and then graded. Following this, coffee beans are bagged in large bags before selling them in a wholesale. Once it sold, coffee beans are roasted using a specific machine for frying and then in the last stage prepared products are packaged in a small packages and sold to the markets.

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coffee
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beans
. Including twelve This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 steps as sorting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
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 by hand, cleaning them, then drying, grading and selling. The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
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beans
. In the initial phase, sorted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
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beans
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must
be cleaned
cleanly
 and then dried outside for four weeks. During this duration workers rake and turn the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
 by special tool in order to dry all of them equally
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beans
are sorted
 in silos and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the mill where it is hulled
 and then graded. Following this, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
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beans
are bagged
 in large bags This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 selling them in a wholesale. Once it sold, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
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beans
are roasted
 using a specific machine for frying and then in the last stage prepared products are packaged
 in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 packages and sold to the markets. 