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Increasing demand for a big space for agriculture setting new accomodation areas neglecting endangered animals

Increasing demand for a big space for agriculture setting new accomodation areas neglecting endangered animals YRPoQ

At present scenario due to burst in population and proliferation in requirements of humanity have created a huge demand for a big space for agriculture setting new accomodation areas and developing business at large scale. Predominantly, I completely disagree with this point of view because this planet is for all. Every living being has right to live on this planet. Just to fulfill their need they can not neglect rare animals. As some of these species are disappearing day by day. We and public administration had to think of them. Today, Every individual is purchasing land for making their houses and villas on the green lands and the farmlands are decreasing rapidly. Just to increase more farmlands government is giving permission to cut forests and this cycle is moving continuously. One day there will be no land left for these imperilled species and ultimately we will left only with human being on this planet. By seeing to this problem government must take some initiative to save endangered animals. It is better to sell land to a construction group rather than selling it to an individual. Sell the land to the large building groups so that they can build multi-storey building for living of human and as well as for the animals. Government should pass some projects on constructing zoo so that these imperilled species can be saved. At last there must be some rules for the landholders that if a land is for farming than they can do only farming on that land and there must be seperate site for living areas and zoo for these vulnerable animals

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big
 space for agriculture setting new Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
 areas and developing business at large scale. Predominantly
, I completely disagree with this point of view This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this planet is for all. Every living being has right to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 on this planet. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 to fulfill their need they can not neglect rare You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of these species are disappearing day by day. We and public administration had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 of them. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
, Every individual is purchasing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
land
 for making their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and villas on the green You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
lands
 and the farmlands are decreasing rapidly
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 to increase more Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "farmlands'" or "farmland's"?farmlands'farmland's
farmlands
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 is giving permission to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 forests and this cycle is moving continuously
. One day there will be no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
land
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 for these Possible spelling mistake found.imperiledimperil led
imperilled
 species and ultimately
 we will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "leave"leave
left
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 with human being on this planet. By seeing to this problem This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 initiative to save endangered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
. It is better to sell You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
land
 to a construction group rather
 than selling it to an individual. Sell the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
land
 to the large building groups This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they can build Possible spelling mistake found.multistory
multi-storey
 building for living of human and as well
 as for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 should pass This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 projects on constructing zoo This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that these Possible spelling mistake found.imperiledimperil led
imperilled
 species can be saved
. At last there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 for the landholders that if a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
land
 is for Use "farmer" to make a comparison with this adjective.farmer
farming
 than they can do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "farm"?farm
farming
 on that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
land
 and there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be Possible spelling mistake found.separate
seperate
 site for living areas and zoo for these vulnerable Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphanimals.animals!animals?animals:animals,animals;
animals