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I am a university student

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I am a university student, I will interact with a lot of people from all over the country. So I was given priority to get vaccinated early to prepare for school. On August 14th, I was called to the commune health station for an injection. It was morning, everyone came quite early to wait to be injected. At 8 am that morning, I was scheduled, met, and waited to be injected. There is much medical staff here supporting the injection process. Everyone has to go through the following steps such as line up, body temperature measurement, and general consultation before injection. We were injected with the AstraZeneca vaccine from Spain. The injection is quite small and completely painless. After returning home, I braced myself for a vaccine reaction. Seven hours after the injection, I feel completely normal and still very healthy. Until the 8th hour, I started to feel feverish, and my body showed signs of fatigue. That’s why I’m tired and don’t want to eat food at all. That night, I had a constant fever and it lasted until 6 am the next morning. Many people do not have any reaction after the injection. But for me, it was a night of terror. I went to bed early but only slept for a few hours before the horrible fever came. That night I could barely sleep. My body was so sore and tired that I couldn't sit up. My body is very hot. It seems to have reached 39 degrees. I used antipyretic, but it didn't seem to have much effect because only after the medicine wore off did the fever came again. One night of terror, at one point I felt that it would be dangerous to be alone with such a high fever. I will cherish this memory forever. Because it makes me know how to take care of my health so that no fever lasts and is so terrible.
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people
from all over the country.
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I was
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given
priority to
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get
vaccinated early to prepare for school. On August 14th, I
was called
to the commune health station for an
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injection
. It was morning, everyone came quite early to wait to
be injected
.

At 8 am that morning, I
was scheduled
, met, and waited to
be injected
. There is much medical staff here supporting the
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injection
process. Everyone
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has to
go through the following steps such as line up,
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body
temperature measurement, and general consultation
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before
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injection
. We
were injected
with the AstraZeneca vaccine from Spain. The
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injection
is quite
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small
and completely painless.

After returning home, I braced myself for a vaccine reaction. Seven hours after the
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injection
, I feel completely normal and
still
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very
healthy. Until the 8th hour, I
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started
to feel feverish, and my
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body
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showed
signs of fatigue. That’s why I’m tired and don’t want to eat food at all.

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night
, I had a constant
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fever
and it lasted until 6 am the
next
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people
do not have any reaction after the
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.
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for me, it was a
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of terror. I went to bed early
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slept for a few hours
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the horrible
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came. That
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sore and tired that I couldn't sit up. My
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hot. It seems to have reached 39 degrees. I
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it didn't seem to have much effect
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because
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only
after the medicine wore off did the
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again.

One
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night
of terror, at one point I felt that it would be
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dangerous
to be alone with such a high
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. I will cherish this memory forever.
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it
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makes
me know how to take care of my health
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that no
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lasts and is
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IELTS essay I am a university student

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
323 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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