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Throughout my academic years I had many classmates with whom I spent a significiant amount of time and did different ineresting my classmates whom I would like to talk about is Baxtiyor who later became a good friend of mine. I met him at class six after I got admitted to the high school and on the first day of my school. We started reading together from class ten and after that he got admitted to a different college. So we studied together for more than 5 years. We often played in the evening together including preparation for the exam, playing and visiting different places of four hometown. I mostly remembered him because he wad good classmate and a friend as well. We spent good times together and since
Throughout my academic years I had
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classmates with whom I spent a
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significiant
amount of time and did
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different
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ineresting
my classmates whom I would like to talk about is
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Baxtiyor
who later became a
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good
friend of mine. I met him at
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class
six after I
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got
admitted to the high school and on the
first
day of my school. We
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started
reading together from
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class
ten and after that he
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got
admitted to a
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different
college.
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So
we studied together for more than 5 years. We
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often
played in the evening together including preparation for the exam, playing and visiting
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different
places of four
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hometown
. I
mostly
remembered him
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because
he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wads", "wadded".
wad
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good
classmate and a friend
as well
. We spent
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good
times together and
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since
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IELTS essay Your teacher has asked you to write a description favourite classmate

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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