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Talk about your sports and activities.

Talk about your sports and activities. NVrwd

I would like to talk about basketball which is the sport that I particularly enjoy and play a few years. When I was young, I saw a movie about basketball and felt that basketball player was so cool. So that I wanted to play it. However, at that time I did not practice basketball at all. Because of the facility and there was no one to practice with me. Then, I came to my friend's school to play basketball with them and I could practice basketball much more often. For me, basketball is a good way to help me pursue a healthy lifestyle. It is also an affordable type of sport as you do not have to buy a lot of specialized sports materials. Finally, playing basketball enables me to develop some important and non-academic skills such as discipline, teamwork, problem-solving, and cooperation.

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basketball
 which is the sport that I particularly
 enjoy and play a few years.

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saw
 a movie about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withball
basketball
 and felt that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withball
basketball
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so
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So that
 I wanted to play it. However
, at that time I did not practice You use this word too often, consider replacing it withball
basketball
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Because
 of the facility and there was no one to practice with me. Then, I came to my friend's school to play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withball
basketball
 with them and I could practice You use this word too often, consider replacing it withball
basketball
 much more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
.

For me, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withball
basketball
 is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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help
 me pursue a healthy lifestyle. It is also
 an affordable type of sport as you do not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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buy
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a lot of
 specialized sports materials. Finally
, playing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withball
basketball
 enables me to develop This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 and non-academic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 such as discipline, teamwork, problem-solving, and cooperation. 