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Talk about your unforgettable experience in life.

Talk about your unforgettable experience in life. OgV67
It was a terrible day even now I was cringe. Close to my home, there is a waterfall with a strong flow. People built a dam on it and made it became a lake. It was a sunny day when I decided to get to that waterfall with my friends. We climbed to the top of it which had become a lake. In there, we held a race that we swam to the opposite bank of the lake. It happened when I reached the bank and look back, I saw that the slowest boy suddenly was drifted along with the water flow. He too weak to swam through the flow so that he drifted along with it. Immediately, I shouted out, and the fastest one jumped out. He caught that boy and supported him to get to the bank. Then I threw a vine I had picked up nearby. The two caught it and were pulled out of the lake. My heart beats fast on all that day and whenever I remember about it. It was an unforgettable experience in my life.
It was a terrible day even
now
I was cringe. Close to my home, there is a waterfall with a strong flow.
People
built a dam on it and made it became a
lake
. It was a sunny day when I decided to
get
to that waterfall with my friends. We climbed to the top of it which had become a
lake
. In there, we held a race that we swam to the opposite bank of the
lake
. It happened when I reached the bank and look back, I
saw
that the slowest boy
suddenly
was drifted
along with the water flow.
He
too weak to swam through the flow
so
that he drifted along with it. Immediately, I shouted out, and the fastest one jumped out. He caught that boy and supported him to
get
to the bank. Then I threw a vine I had picked up nearby. The two caught it and
were pulled
out of the
lake
. My heart beats
fast
on all that day and whenever I remember about it. It was an unforgettable experience in my life.
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IELTS essay Talk about your unforgettable experience in life.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
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