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the best way to solve the problem of traffic congestion is to build sky trains which run overhead rather than on or underground. agree or disagree?

the best way to solve the problem of traffic congestion is to build sky trains which run overhead rather than on or underground. agree or disagree? eR5AW
Anyone who lives in a city is aware of the increasing number of transportation on the road and kinds of problems this creates: traffic jams, air pollution and longer commuting periods. Some people argued that the best way to tackle the problem of traffic congestion is to construct sky trains rather than subways or regular trains. In my point of view, while this solution has some strengths as it can be the most space efficient means of transportation, it has also some weaknesses associated. There are numerous benefits to operating sky trains. To begin with, running sky trains projects are completed at rapid rate than surface or subterranean rail lines. Building ground rail necessitates the acquisition of property before work can begin, which can create substantial delays to the project. This demonstrates that sky rail lines can be erected far faster than conventional rails. Furthermore, stress relief could be effective. The fact that sky trains move in the air is one of their distinguishing features. People may enjoy the view by glancing out the windows while on board. The exposure to open space on elevated railways, as opposed to the subway system, can refresh or revitalize persons who are weary from work. Sky trains, on the other hand, have a few drawbacks which cannot be overlooked. To start with, overhead tubes might result in a breach of privacy. Sky trains run at a high altitude, allowing passengers, who are strangers to them, to breach the private of persons whose homes or workplaces are close to them and at a comparable or lower altitude. It's not comfortable to have private area exposed to public. Besides that, elevated railroads have the potential to cause noise pollution along the skyways which run from early in the morning until late at night. Running sky trains can have a significant impact on residents, and some of them may have insomnia as a result. To summarize, sky trains are far more effective than surface or subterranean trains at easing traffic congestion in metropolitan areas.
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in a city is aware of the increasing number of transportation on the road and kinds of problems this creates: traffic jams, air pollution and longer commuting periods.
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argued that the best way to tackle the problem of traffic congestion is to construct sky
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trains
rather
than subways or regular
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. In my point of view, while this solution has
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strengths as it can be the most space efficient means of transportation, it has
also
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weaknesses associated.

There are numerous benefits to operating sky
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trains
. To
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begin
with, running sky
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trains
projects
are completed
at rapid rate than surface or subterranean
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rail
lines. Building ground
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rail
necessitates the acquisition of property
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before
work can
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begin
, which can create substantial delays to the project. This demonstrates that sky
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rail
lines can
be erected
far faster than conventional rails.
Furthermore
,
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relief could be effective. The fact that sky
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trains
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move
in the air is one of their distinguishing features.
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People
may enjoy the view by glancing out the windows while on board. The exposure to open space on elevated railways, as opposed to the subway system, can refresh or revitalize persons who are weary from work.

Sky
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trains
,
on the other hand
, have a few drawbacks which cannot
be overlooked
. To
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start
with, overhead tubes might result in a breach of privacy. Sky
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trains
run at a high altitude, allowing passengers, who are strangers to them, to breach the private of persons whose homes or workplaces are close to them and at a comparable or lower altitude. It's not comfortable to have private area exposed to public.
Besides
that, elevated railroads have the potential to cause noise pollution along the
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skyways
which run from early in the morning until late at night. Running sky
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trains
can have a significant impact on residents, and
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some
of them may have insomnia
as a result
.

To summarize
, sky
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trains
are far more effective than surface or subterranean
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trains
at easing traffic congestion in metropolitan areas.
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IELTS essay the best way to solve the problem of traffic congestion is to build sky trains which run overhead rather than on or underground. agree or disagree?

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