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Your teacher asks you to write about what you do in your free time. Write about: the things you do in your free time when you do these things. Write about 40 words.

Your teacher asks you to write about what you do in your free time. Write about: the things you do in your free time when you do these things. Write about 40 words. Wynba

Numerous interesting things are done in the free time, but which I like most is the reading book and the watching movies. Reading is my one of favourite things which gives me much pleasure. In my free time I read several kinds of books, but if those are motivational and spiritual then I enjoy it. In my last day of free time I finished a spiritual book namely "The Monk Who Sold His Ferarri" written by Robin Shorma. I enjoyed this book very much and it taught me new life changing ritual which help me to change a bad habit and way of life. Let's turn to that book for a while. Julien Mantile who was a country famous advocate. Moreover, he had a lot amount of money. Further, he had a lot of properties and a pricey car. But, he did not have any peace in his mind. In he meantime, he met a monk and gone to Himalaya with the monk. Also, he learned about some spiritual aspect of life-how a man can lead a peaceful life.

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