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Being a cashless society is what most countries are heading to. Some of these countries support this transition as they believe it will make positive changes to the economy and people’s lives. However, the problem of i

Being a cashless society is what most countries are heading to. Some of these countries support this transition as they believe it will make positive changes to the economy and people’s lives. However, the problem of its security has concerned some people and they shoe no encouragement to undertake this form of transaction. Personally, I would stand for the use of cashless transactions, the reasons will be outlined in this essay. It is indisputable that governments and citizens can gain many benefits form undertaking transactions electronically, one social advantage is the difficulty of money laudering, tax evasion or funding illegal activities. Commonly, the illegal trade often takes place with cash in order to avoid any evidences or records. Nevertheless, in a non-cash world, this no longer happens as a paper trail will be left, so the authorities can track the transaction easily. This is also true for the case of tax evasion and money laudering. It will be impossible to evade paying taxes if source and application of funds can be checked and under control through financial records. Hence, digital payments not only improve the transpareny of the economy, but they also help reduce the crime rate. There is no denying that on using cashless transactions, there is a lack of privacy and security. As a matter of fact, when transactional data is stored in servers, it increases the risks of unauthorized breaches by hackers. In addition, records stolen might be intentionally leaked and lead to many other problems. However, I believe that the benefits digital payments bring with oughtweigh the drawbacks. Furthermore, there’s no going back, we need to face the risks and deal with the difficulties to unlock the advantages. In conclusion, I am totally in support of running transactions technogically rather than with cash. The world is experiencing a rapid and increasing use of digital methods of operating everything, and so should the trade.

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