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your product is good and needs customer needs then people will buy it and advertisement is unnecessary to what extent do you agree or disagree

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Nowadays, population rate is rise iday by day and the people needs also increased everyday. Many people reckon if products are good in quality and they fulfill the needs of the individuals then there is no need for any advertisement. I partially agree with this notion and I explain my point of view in some subsequent paragraphs. To begin with, I explicate why I disagree with this notion with this notion. The first and foremost reason is that reputation. For instance, many companies are famous for their products such as quality, price, sailing rate, and many more. Consequently, c their reputation is very high due to the fact of that people know about their factories due to their services. Hence, that's type of manufacturing industries are not required for any advertisement. Moreover, in many cases people have no time for watching advertisement for product but they have need. As a result, purchased that product in any cost. On the other hand, according to me, no one can neglect the importance of advertisement because, In High tech era, advertisement play crucial in every person life. Younger generation buy the products afterwatching advertisement. To Epitome, if female buy any cosmetic material then they watch the advertisement firstly because they want to know about their product before purchasing. After, seeing advertisement they take decision easily the product is good or bad for her. Consequently, that's why advertisement is best source of marketing. In conclusion, I reckon if anyone buy any costly thing then they watch the advertisement before buying because, sometime the product is not actually good and beneficial.
Nowadays, population rate is rise
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people
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needs
also
increased
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everyday
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people
reckon if
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products
are
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good
in
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quality and
they fulfill the
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needs
of the individuals then there is no
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need
for any
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advertisement
. I
partially
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agree
with this notion and I
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subsequent paragraphs.

To
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with, I explicate why I disagree with this notion with this notion. The
first
and foremost reason is that reputation.
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,
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many
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companies
are
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famous
for their
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products
such as quality, price, sailing rate, and
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many
more.
Consequently
, c their reputation is
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very
high due to the fact of that
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people
know about their factories due to their services.
Hence
, that's type of manufacturing industries are not required for any
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advertisement
.
Moreover
, in
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many
cases
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people
have no time for watching
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advertisement
for
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product
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but
they have
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need
.
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,
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purchased
that
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product
in any cost.

On the other hand
, according to me, no one can neglect the importance of
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advertisement
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because
, In High tech era,
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advertisement
play crucial in every person life. Younger generation
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buy
the
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products
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afterwatching
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advertisement
. To Epitome, if female
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buy
any cosmetic material then they
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watch
the
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advertisement
firstly
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because
they want to know about their
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product
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before
purchasing. After, seeing
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advertisement
they take decision
easily
the
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product
is
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good
or
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bad
for her.
Consequently
, that's why
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advertisement
is best source of marketing.

In conclusion
, I reckon if anyone
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buy
any costly thing then they
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watch
the
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advertisement
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before
buying
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because
, sometime the
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product
is not actually
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good
and beneficial.
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IELTS essay your product is good and needs customer needs then people will buy it and advertisement is unnecessary

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
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