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Crime novels and TV series have become quite popular in recent years. What is your opinion about these crime dramas?

Crime novels and TV series have become quite popular in recent years. What is your opinion about these crime dramas? GWGwe
Due to sophisticated technolog internet has basic nessecity for everyone. While it is believed by some, use of these data has change people perceptions over the years. Nowadays, they are read criminal books and watching television series. i think that, there are several factors are affecting this treand. this treands are discuss futher in brifley. Considering to alter of public peference onto crime novels. Firstly, crime rates are increase significantly; Although due to globolization and migration to the other countries, different minded people lives together. So that abues activities are too common. For example, selling of narcotix, bloodshoot and theaft are rise then masses get more attention on that. Secondly, money influence in all fields.
Due to sophisticated
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technolog
internet has basic
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nessecity
for everyone. While it
is believed
by
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some
,
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use
of these data has
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change
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people
perceptions over the years. Nowadays, they
are read
criminal books and watching television series.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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think
that, there are several factors are affecting this
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treand
.
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this
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treands
are
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discuss
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futher
in
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brifley
.
The verb 'Considering' is used with the gerund form: "Considering altering".
Considering to alter
of public
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peference
onto crime novels.
Firstly
, crime rates are increase
significantly
; Although due to
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globolization
and migration to the other countries,
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different
minded
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
lives
together.
“So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
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abues
activities are too common.
For example
, selling of
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narcotix
,
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bloodshoot
and
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theaft
are rise then masses
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get
more attention on that.
Secondly
, money influence in all fields.

IELTS essay Crime novels and TV series have become quite popular in recent years. What is your opinion about these crime dramas?

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