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Your opinion about life in the countryside

Your opinion about life in the countryside ORAgE
In my opinion, I think life in the countryside has many good points. Firstly, People here are very friendly and often help others. Secondly, space here is very spacious and peaceful. And everything seems to move more slowly here than in the city. Thirdly, there aren't many vehicles moving on the road as in the city. In addition, the food are very delicious, it made from natural materials. and it also sells very cheap. Finally, there are has many traditional activities that we can do in the countryside such as flying kite, horse riding, rowing boats and a lot of things. For there reason, i think life in the countryside is the place I should live.
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vehicles moving on the road as in the city.
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delicious, it made from natural materials.
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traditional activities that we can do in the countryside such as flying kite, horse riding, rowing boats and
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things. For there reason,
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IELTS essay Your opinion about life in the countryside

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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