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Mass media has changed the way we communicate.It has both positive and negative effects.give your opinion and discuss.

Mass media has changed the way we communicate. It has both positive and negative effects. give your opinion and discuss. eApbO
Due to advancement of technology humanbeings can talk with each other easily. Nowdays new application has alterntion the way we exchanging of information. It has both pros and cons. That are the many effect which will discuss. On the one hand, Internet is the boon for the mankind to transfer idea with others. Mass media through save their time and easily complete work from home. For example some people can attian their meeting because may are outside of the home but now they connect by internet and complete their work. Moreover, more number of application are lunched in the market so people communicate and connected with family and friends. On the other hand, advanced technology effect negatively for communication. People talk by mass media so they are not connected heartly. People cannot understand other people feeling because they meet a socially not physicaly. For instance people are in trouble but they communicate by mass media so do not share their feeling but when they meet physicaly and solve a their problem quickly. Furthermore, communication by mass media can create problem in their body. Specily eyes are damage beacuse higher rays which can damage eyes and effect on other parts of body. To conclude that, as application of scientific knowledge merits is the a save time and complete their work demerits is damage eye sight and feeling less. In my opinion positive side is the best way to communicate by social media. It will be recommanded that people using application of mass media for seciure their future.
Due to advancement of technology
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humanbeings
can talk with each
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other
easily
.
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Nowdays
new
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application
has
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alterntion
the way
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we exchanging
of information. It has both pros and cons. That are the
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many effect
which will discuss.

On the one hand, Internet is the boon for the mankind to transfer
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idea
with others.
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Mass
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media
through save their time and
easily
complete work from home.
For example
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some
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people
can
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attian
their meeting
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because
may are
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outside of
the home
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but
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now
they connect by internet and complete their work.
Moreover
, more number of
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application
are lunched
in the market
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so
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people
communicate and connected with family and friends.

On the
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other
hand, advanced technology effect
negatively
for communication.
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People
talk by
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mass
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media
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so
they are not connected
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heartly
.
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People
cannot understand
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other
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people
feeling
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because
they
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meet
a
socially
not
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physicaly
.
For instance
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people
are in trouble
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but
they communicate by
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mass
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media
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so
do not share their feeling
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when they
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meet
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physicaly
and solve
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a their problem
quickly
.
Furthermore
, communication by
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mass
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media
can create problem in their body.
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Specily
eyes are damage
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beacuse
higher rays which can damage eyes and effect on
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other
parts of body.

To conclude
that, as
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application
of scientific knowledge merits is
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the a
save time and complete their work demerits is damage
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eye sight
and feeling less. In my opinion
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positive
side is the best way to communicate by social
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media
. It will be
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recommanded
that
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people
using
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application
of
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mass
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media
for
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seciure
their future.
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IELTS essay Mass media has changed the way we communicate. It has both positive and negative effects. give your opinion and discuss.

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