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Firstly, the men on the left are drinking beer and smiling. The other man is wearing yellow suit. The women in the middle is walking also wearing purple dress and apron. The chef doing grill. The other chef does grilling also wearing apron and chefs hat. It was a sunny sunday afternoon. Birds were singing and the wind was softly fondly people’s skin. Remzi and Remziye were going to go for a picnic that afternoon. Unfortunately they saw some nimbus and decided not to go. They were living in England, and as you know the weather is usually rainy in England.

Firstly
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 are drinking beer and smiling. The other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 is wearing yellow suit. The women in the middle is walking also
 wearing purple dress and apron. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 chef doing grill. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 other chef The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "goes grilling".goes grilling
does grilling
also
 wearing apron and chefs hat. It was a sunny Possible spelling mistake found.SundaySundayssundrysundaeSundassun day
sunday
 afternoon. Birds were singing and the wind was softly
fondly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s skin. Possible spelling mistake found.Remi
Remzi
 and Possible spelling mistake found.RemainedRemainRemainsReceiveRequireEmpire
Remziye
 were going to go for a picnic that afternoon. Unfortunately they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 nimbus and decided not to go. They were living in England, and as you know the weather is usually
 rainy in England. 