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Your opinion about banning smoking in public places

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These days, a number of countries all over the world has decided to ban smoking in public places. In other words, they don’t allow smokers to smoke in places such as bus station, airports, restaurants, etc. some people believe that it is a positive step. However, there are some people who consider it as a harmful action. I agree with the first group, and I am going to describe my opinion in this essay with details. The first reason for supporting this decision is People‘s health. It is evident that if somebody smokes in a public place, he or she influences other people‘s health. Therefore, smoking in public places should be banned, in ordered to prevent respiratory diseases since children and elderly‘s immune system is really weak against such illnesses. Having said that, there are some inconsiderate individuals who drop their cigarettes after smoking wherever they want, which is dangerous for the nature and environment that should be protected for other generations as well. As a consequence, some special places like smoking rooms force people to use ashtrays or trashcans. On the other hand, there are some groups who consider smoking prohibition as an excessive rule, which is useless, since they do not think that smoking could be harmful. In addition, they say forbidding smoking can increase people‘s attitude to alcohol and some other drugs. To sum up, banning people from smoking in public places has both pros and cons, and it is obvious that this law has some fans and also protesters who have different perspectives. Considering both sides of the issue, I am in favor of the first group opinion. That is to say, advantages of this rule outweigh its drawbacks.
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health. It is evident that if somebody smokes in a
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public
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, he or she influences
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people‘s
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respiratory diseases since children and elderly‘s immune system is
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Having said that, there are
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On the
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consider
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prohibition as an excessive
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could be harmful.
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can increase
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people‘s
attitude to alcohol and
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To sum up, banning
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has both pros and cons, and it is obvious that this law has
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IELTS essay Your opinion about banning smoking in public places

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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