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writing about the topic dressing for work. you should write more than 150 words. use the vocabulary from that unit. nnnnn nnnnn nnnnn nnnnnn nnmmmc vvcvv vgvvvh bhbhh hbh h v v v v v v v v

writing about the topic dressing for work. you should write more than 150 words. use the vocabulary from that unit. nnnnn nnnnn nnnnn nnnnnn nnmmmc vvcvv vgvvvh bhbhh hbh h v v v v v v v v GLVGx
Many students, both male and female, would agree that they often look scruffy1 in their T-shirts and jeans. However, those who go into the world of business have to make a rapid transition and learn about dress codes2 in the workplace. Business attire3 needs to project a professional image, and clothing that reveals4 too much cleavage5 (for women), or your back, your chest or your midriff6 is not appropriate, even in a casual business setting. For women, see-through fabrics7 should be avoided, and skirts should not be too tight or too short, though nobody wants to look frumpy8. For men, trousers should not be too tight, or shirts too open. Women often need a good choice of outfits9 and men find a good range of suits10, ties and casual trousers and jackets invaluable11. Accessories12, e. g. jewellery, shoes and cufflinks13, can also enhance the professional look. Some offices have dress-down days14, often Fridays, when staff can wear more casual clothes. In other jobs, of course, people are required to wear uniforms, or protective clothing such as overalls15 and safety helmets16.
Many
students, both male and female, would
agree
that they
often
look scruffy1 in their T-shirts and jeans.
However
, those who go into the world of business
have to
make
a rapid transition and learn about dress codes2 in the workplace. Business attire3 needs to project a professional image, and clothing that reveals4 too much cleavage5 (for women), or your back, your chest or your midriff6 is not appropriate, even in a casual business setting. For women,
see
-through fabrics7 should
be avoided
, and skirts should not be too tight or too short, though nobody wants to look frumpy8. For
men
, trousers should not be too tight, or shirts too open. Women
often
need a
good
choice of outfits9 and
men
find a
good
range of suits10, ties and casual trousers and jackets invaluable11. Accessories12,
e. g.
jewellery
, shoes and cufflinks13, can
also
enhance the professional look.
Some
offices have dress-down days14,
often
Fridays, when staff can wear more casual clothes. In other jobs,
of course
,
people
are required
to wear uniforms, or protective clothing such as overalls15 and safety helmets16.
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IELTS essay writing about the topic dressing for work. you should write more than 150 words. use the vocabulary from that unit. nnnnn nnnnn nnnnn nnnnnn nnmmmc vvcvv vgvvvh bhbhh hbh h v v v v v v v v

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
180 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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