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I come from Nghe An which located in the middle of Viet Nam. It is 300km from Ha Noi and lies next to Thanh Hoa, Ha Tinh. My hometown has a lot of natural views such as the paddy of fields that look like the stairs and tea island, sunflower hill. In addition, my hometown is famous for delicious specializes such as "nhut Thanh Chuong" and "tuong Nam Dan". People in here are very friendly. Every year, there are a lot of tourist visiting my town and all of them are very satisfied with these food and hospitality of the local. About me, i really love my town because i have lived there since i was born, i had a lot of beautiful memories that i will never forget. My hometown has many studious people, that is why i'm so proud of this place. This is also the house of the great leader of our country-Ho Chi Minh. In the future, i can work other places in my country but my hometown is always go-choice
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IELTS essay your home town or your home village

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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