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1. What job would you like to do ? 2. What type of part time jobs do students in your country do? 3. What type of part-time job would you like?

1. What job would you like to do? 2. What type of part time jobs do students in your country do? 3. What type of part-time job would you like? 6aPW0

In the future, I want to become a business analyst. This job can analyze the market and plan the next step for the company. There are a lot of part time jobs for students in my country. A student can work part time in a coffee shop or in a super market. In the other hand, a student can have a freelance job like a photographer, graber, tutor, …. In my opinion, I want to have a part time job that I can manage my time easily and independent of any factors.

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 for students in my country. A student can work part You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 in a coffee shop or in a super market. In the other hand, a student can have a freelance You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
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, tutor, …. In my opinion, I want to have a part You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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job
 that I can manage my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 and independent of any factors. 