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How do you spend your leisure time

How do you spend your leisure time Ew0nR
In my spare time I used to do many activities. Most of these activities with my family and friends. The first one of these activities, I hike with my son about 50 minutes daily. Hiking is best for me to build health body and mind. Accompanying my child is also, to train his from his youngest age how practice hobby that make him healthy and active. Secondly, I watch Television and follow up the world news. The best channel for watching is BBC English news and documentary. watching TV keeping me updated with all incidences and events worldwide. In summary I like to spend my leisure time in walking with family and listening and watching world news and documentary in television.
In my spare time I
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many
activities. Most of these activities with my family and friends.

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first
one of these activities, I hike with my son about 50 minutes daily. Hiking is best for me to build health body and mind. Accompanying my child is
also
, to train his from his youngest age how practice hobby that
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make
him healthy and active.

Secondly
, I
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watch
Television and follow up the world news. The best channel for watching is BBC English news and documentary.
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watching
TV keeping me updated with all incidences and
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events
worldwide.

In summary I like to spend my leisure time in walking with family and listening and watching world news and documentary in television.

IELTS essay How do you spend your leisure time

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
121 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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