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Your friend wants to start a new business of import and export. He is confused with products in which he should deal with. Write a letter to explain himWhat type of product he should import and exportWhy these products beneficialAnd your interest in his b v.2

Your friend wants to start a new business of import and export. He is confused with products in which he should deal with. Write a letter to explain himWhat type of product he should import and exportWhy these products beneficialAnd your interest in his b v. 2
Dear Amart, I hope this letter of mine finds you and your family in ravishing health. the purpose of my writing is regarding your interest and curiosity in products that could be exported from India for the expansion of your import and export business. In my opinion, the specific products could be clothing range like (ethnic or fusion one) and ornaments from India could provide a large profit from the Russian market. As you know India is a multicultural country, clothing from every part of it is diverse in wearing and vivid in many forms. I know a few villages in Rajasthan, Chennai and North-Eastern part of India where some self-dependent women make these things on cheap rates with quality. Indian culture is very popular and interesting in Russia, people there always lured by the range of ethnic clothing with style, also authentication with purity and strength are a few the virtue of these items. In addition, associating these local workers can be an international benefit for both. I am also in favor of introducing an application for smartphones for the advertising these items, I also have a prototype of that. I hope you think about my recommendation and reply soon, I will always be ready to help. Provide my best to your family. Best Regards, Mani
Dear
Amart
,

I hope this letter of mine finds you and your family in ravishing health.
the
purpose of my writing is regarding your interest and curiosity in products that could
be exported
from India for the expansion of your import and export business.

In my opinion, the specific products could be clothing range like (ethnic or fusion one) and ornaments from India could provide a large profit from the Russian market. As you know India is a multicultural country, clothing from every part of it is diverse in wearing and vivid in
many
forms. I know a few villages in Rajasthan, Chennai and North-Eastern part of India where
some
self-dependent women
make
these things on
cheap
rates with quality.

Indian culture is
very
popular and interesting in Russia,
people
there always lured by the range of ethnic clothing with style,
also
authentication with purity and strength are a few the virtue of these items.
In addition
, associating these local workers can be an international benefit for both. I am
also
in favor of introducing an application for smartphones for the advertising these items, I
also
have a prototype of that.

I hope you
think
about my recommendation and reply
soon
, I will always be ready to
help
. Provide my best to your family.

Best Regards,

Mani
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Your friend wants to start a new business of import and export. He is confused with products in which he should deal with. Write a letter to explain himWhat type of product he should import and exportWhy these products beneficialAnd your interest in his b v. 2

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  American English
7 paragraphs
216 words
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