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Your friend wants to come to your city and stay with you for one week for a holiday. However, it is impossible for you to accompany him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should; • apologise to your friend• explain why you cannot stay v.1

Your friend wants to come to your city and stay with you for one week for a holiday. However, it is impossible for you to accompany him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should; • apologise to your friend• explain why you cannot stay v. 1
Many companies today are owned and managed by more than one member of the same family. There are obvious advantages to this type of business managements, including possessing common values and loyalty. However, it is quite common that family-run businesses often suffer from lack of expertise and favouritism. One evident benefit of family-run enterprise is that family members often have shared values. In other words, family members are likely to share the same ethos and beliefs on how things should be done. This gives a business an extra sense of purpose and pride, which can be considered a competitive edge for a company. IKEA, Dr. August Oetker, Ford Motor Company and Wal-Mart are all examples of successful family-owned businesses, all employees of which are committed to their company values and are willing to build a long-lasting enterprise. Moreover, loyalty is also a benefit which can be attributed to family-run companies. Strong personal bonds mean that people are likely to stick together in hard times and show the determination needed for business success. During the 2008 global family-owned firms were the ones to sustain the least losses regarding financial matters. Nonetheless, running a family company, has obvious disadvantages. Firstly, such companies may suffer from lack of skills or experience. So, some family businesses may appoint somebody into roles for which they are not exported enough or have no training and skills for. This can have a negative effect on the success of the business and lead to a stressful working environment. Additionally, it is hard to be objective when choosing to promote an employee, regardless whether they are a member of your family or not. Family-owned companies oftentimes show favouritism towards a relative instead of promoting the best worker. It is important to make business decisions for business reasons, rather than personal ones, but this can sometimes be difficult if family members are involved. In conclusion, today there are numerous companies that are owned and run by a member of one family. While such businesses have benefits, including motivation and loyalty, there are also major drawbacks, such as unqualified staff and in-group bias.
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of the same
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. There are obvious advantages to this type of
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managements, including possessing common values and loyalty.
However
, it is quite common that family-run
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businesses
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often
suffer from lack of expertise and
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favouritism
.

One evident benefit of family-run enterprise is that
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family
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members
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often
have shared values.
In other words
,
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family
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members
are likely to share the same ethos and beliefs on how things should
be done
. This gives a
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business
an extra sense of purpose and pride, which can
be considered
a competitive edge for a
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company
. IKEA, Dr. August
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Oetker
, Ford Motor
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and
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Wal-Mart
are all examples of successful family-
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owned
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businesses
, all employees of which
are committed
to their
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values and are willing to build a long-lasting enterprise.
Moreover
, loyalty is
also
a benefit which can
be attributed
to family-run
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companies
. Strong personal bonds mean that
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people
are likely to stick together in
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hard
times and
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show
the determination needed for
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business
success. During the 2008 global family-
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owned
firms were the
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ones
to sustain the least losses regarding financial matters.

Nonetheless, running a
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family
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company
, has obvious disadvantages.
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, such
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companies
may suffer from lack of
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or experience.
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,
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may appoint somebody into roles for which they are not exported
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or have no training and
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skills
for. This can have a
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negative
effect on the success of the
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business
and lead to a stressful working environment.
Additionally
, it is
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hard
to be objective when choosing to promote an employee, regardless whether they are a
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member
of your
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family
or not. Family-
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oftentimes
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show
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towards a relative
instead
of promoting the best worker. It is
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to
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decisions for
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reasons,
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,
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members
are involved
.

In conclusion
,
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there are numerous
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companies
that are
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owned
and run by a
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member
of one
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family
. While such
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businesses
have benefits, including motivation and loyalty, there are
also
major drawbacks, such as unqualified staff and in-group bias.
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IELTS essay Your friend wants to come to your city and stay with you for one week for a holiday. However, it is impossible for you to accompany him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should; • apologise to your friend• explain why you cannot stay v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
352 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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