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A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - thank him/her for the invitation - explain why you canno v.2

A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - thank him/her for the invitation - explain why you canno v. 2
Dear Mandeep, Thanks a lot for inviting me to spend time with you in Canada. I was waiting for this time since it has been a long 4 years that we have met. Moreover, Canada is in my bucket list to visit as I am fasicinated by it' s beauty. As much as I was excited to visit, I am sad to tell you that I won' t be able to make it because of a my prior commitment to visit my grandparents in Punjab. Because of my job, I was so busy that I did not get time to see them from last one year, and I was very regretful for this. My Grandparents are getting older and I do not want to miss an opportunity to meet them and spend time with them. These holidays are only time that I can spend some quality time with them cherrishing old memories. However, I wanted to tell that I will have my winter vacations in the last week of year. I wish to visit to you then; you will also have free time during that week because of Christmas Celebrations. Also, I would love to be with you during the New Year evening to celebrate and have fun as we used to do during our college days. Let me know, if this plan suits you well. Yours lovingly, XYZ
Dear
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Mandeep
,

Thanks a lot for inviting me to spend
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time
with you in Canada. I was waiting for this
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time
since it has been a long 4 years that we have met.
Moreover
, Canada is in my bucket list to
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visit
as I am
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fasicinated
by
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it&
#039; s beauty.

As much as I
was excited
to
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visit
, I am sad to
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tell
you that I
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won&
#039; t be able to
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make
it
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because
of
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a my prior
commitment to
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visit
my grandparents in Punjab.
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Because
of my job, I was
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so
busy that I did not
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get
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time
to
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see
them from last one
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year
, and I was
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very
regretful for this. My Grandparents are getting older and I do not want to miss an opportunity to
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meet
them and spend
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time
with them. These holidays are
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only
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time
that I can spend
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some
quality
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time
with them
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cherrishing
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old
memories.

However
, I wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
that I will have my winter vacations in the last week of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
. I wish to
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visit
to you then; you will
also
have free
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time
during that week
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because
of Christmas Celebrations.
Also
, I would
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love
to be with you during the New
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Year
evening to celebrate and have fun as we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to do during our college days.
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Let
me know
If " if" starts an indirect question, you do not need to put a comma before it.
, if
this plan suits you well.

Yours
lovingly
,

XYZ
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - thank him/her for the invitation - explain why you canno v. 2

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
228 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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