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“Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right. ”Do you agree with this statement? Write your essay giving your opinion using examples from your own experience. v.10

“Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right. ” Write your essay giving your opinion using examples from your own experience. v. 10
It is suggested that initial impressions are always accurate. However, I strongly disagree with this proposition. Firstly, from my observation, people tend to hide away their true nature during the first encounters with strangers. This is possibly due to the feelings of doubts and insecurity associated with having to socialise with unfamiliar individuals. To illustrate, despite my usual free-spirited and light-headed demeanor, when I first got acquainted with my friends, I used to be very meticulous with my choice of words since at the beginning, I still kept my guards up with them. I believe, these polar social behaviors are common among members of society and therefore, first impressions do not always reflect one' s characteristics and should not be treated as the guidelines to do so. Secondly, people are liable to make false judgments on one’s personality traits during their first meeting. The explanation for this statement, as cited in numerous psychological studies, is that people seem to remember negative, highly immoral actions more vividly than positive, moral ones as the former are often less typical and more spontaneous. From my personal experience, for instance, I always seem to associate people with their bad behaviors such as littering or cursing more frequently than with meritorious ones such as helping out a stranger when needed. In this case, I strongly feel that if I decide to infer one’s attributes based on such biased feelings, I will always reach the wrong conclusion. All in all, I take the view that we should not rely on first impressions as they can be influenced by many factors.
It
is suggested
that initial impressions are always accurate.
However
, I
strongly
disagree with this proposition.

Firstly
, from my observation,
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people
tend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hide
away their true nature during the
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first
encounters with strangers. This is
possibly
due to the feelings of doubts and insecurity associated with having to
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socialise
with unfamiliar individuals. To illustrate, despite my usual free-spirited and light-headed demeanor, when I
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first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
acquainted with my friends, I
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used
to be
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very
meticulous with my choice of words since at the beginning, I
still
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kept
my guards up with them. I believe, these polar social behaviors are common among members of society and
therefore
,
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first
impressions do not always reflect
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one&
#039; s characteristics and should not
be treated
as the guidelines to do
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so
.

Secondly
,
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people
are liable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
false judgments on one’s personality traits during their
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first
meeting. The explanation for this statement, as cited in numerous psychological studies, is that
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people
seem to remember
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negative
,
highly
immoral actions more
vividly
than
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
, moral
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ones
as the former are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
less typical and more spontaneous. From my personal experience,
for instance
, I always seem to associate
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people
with their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
behaviors such as littering or cursing more
frequently
than with meritorious
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ones
such as helping out a stranger when needed.
In this case
, I
strongly
feel that if I decide to infer one’s attributes based on such biased feelings, I will always reach the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
conclusion.

All in all, I take the view that we should not rely on
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first
impressions as they can
be influenced
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
factors.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay “Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right. ” Write your essay giving your opinion using examples from your own experience. v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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