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Your favoutire electronic device

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My favorite electronic device is the iPhone. Which is the most popular and used by people in the world. I have used Ip for two years ago. I love it so much because it's my gift from my mom. There are many benefits I enjoy. It's not only interesting but also portable. The advantages of IP are design, operating system, and sharp and responsive touch screen. I love the camera which I took a lot of beautiful pictures of. However, the disadvantage is the draining battery. I even charge it three times a day that I don't like. On the other hand, Up is very useful and economical. Therefore, I recommend you to use and experience the features of IP.
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IELTS essay Your favoutire electronic device

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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