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Your favorite place to go

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Dalat city is a place that I want to visit the most in the next few years. Firstly, Dalat city is a place known as the land of flowers. In DaLat city, it is known by many people because there are many beautiful flowers which attract a lot of tourists from abroad. Secondly, the weather in Dalat city is very cold. That's the strong point that makes me want to visit. Although the weather is cold, I really want to explore because the place where I live is very cold only when it comes to winter. Finally, I want to enter the strawberry garden. Strawberries are my favorite fruit, but strawberries are usually easy to grow in cold climates. Therefore, Dalat is the most popular place, when you go there you can freely pick as much as you want. In general, in the next few years, I really want to visit Dalat and make many memories, take many pictures to capture those moments
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, when you go there you can
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.
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IELTS essay Your favorite place to go

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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