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It is indeed true that the entertainers are paid wealthy more than other professions. However, this large scale of payment should be questioned. I strongly disagree with this notion. In this essay I would like to express my justification with evidence. There are a huge number of professionals working under health and educational field received a low scale of payment compared to the entertainers. For illustration, Last month one of the famous newspaper ‘The Mangalam’ revealed that, the actress Nayanthara signed a contract for four crores which may depends on her glory and talent Meantime Dr.Manju a senior surgeon of Medical college gained only thousand hundreds. It is true both are working hardly to nourish the life of each civilian. One used her calibre to put a relaxation in our busy life while the other one dedicate her service for others.it shows enjoyment is more valuable than health. I believe that that it is a kind of discrimination even though the entertainers like eminent s

It is indeed true that the entertainers are paid wealthy more than other professions. However, this large scale of payment should be questioned. I strongly disagree with this notion. In this essay I would like to express my justification with evidence. There are a huge number of professionals working under health and educational field received a low scale of payment compared to the entertainers. For illustration, Last month one of the famous newspaper ‘The Mangalam’ revealed that, the actress Nayanthara signed a contract for four crores which may depends on her glory and talent Meantime Dr. Manju a senior surgeon of Medical college gained only thousand hundreds. It is true both are working hardly to nourish the life of each civilian. One used her calibre to put a relaxation in our busy life while the other one dedicate her service for others. it shows enjoyment is more valuable than health. I believe that that it is a kind of discrimination even though the entertainers like eminent s jQL08

Indeed a number of people thing the entertainers are paid too much money. However I thing social workers too need to get enough money for them self too and there are also skilled labour working for their family. I strongly disagree with this statement. To begin with these entertainers take as to the top of the world every day. But there are thousands of skilled labours on each country and they do not get sefitiant money for their day to day life. However film stars and others get money as much as they want and they live on the edge of the world with their family. Although there are skilled labours like artists and sculpture makers how get less money even if they work hard. Except in Maldives the fisherman’s get as much money of the fish they cache every day and the labours also get enough money to run their family. but India poor laboured get less money and less jobs for their life style. However in these decades life has been changing due to this pandemic known as the corona it has killed thousands of man. As a result billions of job vacancies are open and man gets enough money. But however the movies and other music concerts are shut down and these entertainers do not get enough money nowadays. H however in this year 2022 films have been started and it is again going bake to the old life style. As it has been noted I disagree with this stamen due to this that people are not getting enough money at all.

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Indeed
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people
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. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
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thing
 social workers too need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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enough
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money
 for them self too and there are also
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sefitiant
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money
 for their It appears that two hyphens are missing.day-to-day
day to day
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life
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 film stars This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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money
 as much as they Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).want, and
want and
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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Possible spelling mistake. 'labours' is British English.labors
labours
 like artists and sculpture makers how This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 less You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 even if they work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
.

Except A determiner is probably missing here: "in the Maldives".in the Maldives
in Maldives
 the fisherman’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 as much You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 of the fish they cache every day and the Possible spelling mistake. 'labours' is British English.labors
labours
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuitableamplesufficientfulladequateabundant
enough
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money
 to run their family. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
 India poor Possible spelling mistake. 'laboured' is British English.labored
laboured
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 less You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 and Did you mean "fewer"? The noun jobs is countable.fewer
less
 jobs for their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 style. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 in these Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "decades'" or "decade's"?decades'decade's
decades
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 has been changing due to this pandemic known as the corona it has killed thousands of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
. As a result
 billions of job vacancies are open and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuitableamplesufficientfulladequateabundant
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
however
 the movies and other music concerts are shut
 down and these entertainers do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuitableamplesufficientfulladequateabundant
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 nowadays. H however
 in this year 2022 films have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 and it is again going bake to the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 style.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 it has been noted
 I disagree with this stamen due to this that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are not getting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuitableamplesufficientfulladequateabundant
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 at all. 