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Some organization believe that employees should be dressed smartly others value quality of work

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The role of
apprrence
on
skills
has always been

debatable issue and
now
become more
controuersi


that
some
beable
claim that
woukere
should
does


nicely
will
remainings
reckon that quality of

web ad
ikills


should
be
considverd
. This
sou


will
thet
a light on bath the approaches and I shall

describe
reasons in my forthcoming paragraphs

There are legitimate factors that can
be held
.

accountable
why
dresing
sence
is
important
the

prominent is that
it beasts
the confidence of

employies
. To elaborate, while
intuacting
with


client are presenting my
puesentation
, they

confidentaly
talk with

Jany


not

consumers without

hesitation,
because
, at that time, they do

commented by
any one
regarding

thin

dress
.
Maurouve
, in
some
suganisations
, the

dress
is the
symbal
of
particulare
departments.

To
Just
gRecause
of
good
outfits, marketing of products.

be
done in a

effective
way. Nowadays,
Imant


clathing
shows
the
bixenon
's personality and it

helps
to
improve
the productivity of any
company
.

and
increases
riputation
.
People
can
recognige
+

warbin


from any organization through
theire
dressing

on
the flip side of coin, there are
some
reasons
que
te
which quality of work is essential. The
first
one is that the
succus
of any
company
can
only
passible
when they have
Jany
and employee talent to do work. To exemplify, consider that
woubine
is
jusly
dressed well
but
he
are
the have
not
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IELTS essay Some organization believe that employees should be dressed smartly others value quality of work

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  American English
31 paragraphs
225 words
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