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Your family and friends are encouraging you to buy a new car. What are some benefits and downsides of purchasing a brand new vehicle? Explain your thoughts using examples.

Your family and friends are encouraging you to buy a new car. What are some benefits and downsides of purchasing a brand new vehicle? Explain your thoughts using examples. p5DY0
In the present time most of the family andfriends encourage people to buy a new vehicle for time saving and easy to prefer and anywhere go. Now I will describe what are the benifts and disvantages in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are various advantages if a person buy a new car like they can not barrow the car from friends and family due to the fact is they have their own vehicle, further more, if a dwellers have their own car they can go any where and anytime also. Moving further, masses have also save the time, because if they go by bicycle and by walk they can waste their time, and people are late arriving on theirwork and jobs. On the other hand, now I will explicate what are the disvantages are they Can maintain their car and month by month service the vehicle and take care of the car also. In addition, if a people buy a car the family and friends can distrut them to barrow the car and force also. the last main disvantages ore the sometime a place their car do hat go those time people prefer to go with walk and using by bicycle also. To conclusion with, if a individuals buy acar their are enormous benefits and disvantagesare they have also maintained service car.
In the present
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time
most of the family
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andfriends
encourage
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people
to
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buy
a new vehicle for
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time
saving and easy to prefer and anywhere go.
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Now
I will
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describe
what are the
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benifts
and
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disvantages
in upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, there are various

advantages if a person
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buy
a new

car like they can not barrow the car

from friends and family due to the fact

is they have their
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own
vehicle,
further


more, if
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a dwellers
have their
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own
car

they can go
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any where
and anytime
also
. Moving
further
, masses have
also
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save
the
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time
,
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because
if they go by bicycle and by walk they can waste their
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time
, and
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people
are late
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arriving on
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theirwork
and jobs.

On the other hand
,
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now
I will explicate

what are the
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disvantages
are they

Can maintain their
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car
and month by

month service the vehicle and take care of the
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car
also
.
In addition
, if a
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people
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buy
a
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car
the family and friends can

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distrut
them to barrow the
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car
and

force
also
.
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the
last main
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disvantages


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ore
the sometime a place their car

do hat go those
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time
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people
prefer

to
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go with
walk and using by bicycle

also
.

To conclusion with, if
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a individuals
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buy
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acar
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their
are enormous benefits and

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disvantagesare
they have
also
maintained service
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car
.
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IELTS essay Your family and friends are encouraging you to buy a new car. What are some benefits and downsides of purchasing a brand new vehicle? Explain your thoughts using examples.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
223 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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