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Down and out in London and Parish

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Orwell travels Parish and engages in searching the jobs to have accuracy regarding level and experience of poverty. Such strategy encompasses the narrator to have the insight of poverty in critical way(Different level). This is the exploration of dark(hidden) side of Parish. Accordingly, he accumulates the experience of accommodation, trauma of job search, struggle for survival and bitter feeling of plungeur
Orwell travels Parish and engages in searching the jobs to have accuracy regarding level and experience of poverty. Such strategy encompasses the narrator to have the insight of poverty in critical way(
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Different
level). This is the exploration of dark(hidden) side of Parish.
Accordingly
, he accumulates the experience of accommodation, trauma of job search, struggle for survival and bitter feeling of
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IELTS essay Down and out in London and Parish

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
60 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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