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After the pandemic is over, teaching and learning activities at universities must be carried out completely online

After the pandemic is over, teaching and learning activities at universities must be carried out completely online PgnBd
Around the world, many countries have been affected by the Covid-19 pandemic. After the pandemic is over, teaching and learning activities at universities must be carried out completely online. In my view, I do not agree with this statement, because activities are limited and less effective or conducive. Online learning system activities may be easy to do without coming to class and can be easily accessed anywhere and at a predetermined time. However, activities that must be done offline are limited, for example coming to class, participating in organizational activities, socializing and many other activities. With the online learning system and technological advances that are increasingly developing, students have to be in front of the screen all the time when there is Virtual via the google meet application. Online teaching and learning activities are less effective or conducive in learning, for example when the network of one lecturer or student is unstable in a virtual meet via the zoom or google meeting application, and when the lecturer gives research assignments that should be done with groups and business partners to build a business with meet directly. Therefore, not all students have a good network connection area and not all students are in a good financial situation, and should be able to socialize directly but cannot The conclusion is that both lecturers and students can also master technology more with the existence of an online learning system which makes time more flexible, but online learning makes activities limited, such as socializing, and less effective or conducive because not all students have good network connections. It would be better if learning all academic activities is carried out offline, because there are some activities that require face-to-face learning.
Around the world,
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countries have been
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affected
by the Covid-19 pandemic. After the pandemic is over, teaching and
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learning
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activities
at universities
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must
be carried
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online
. In my view, I do not
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agree
with this statement,
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because
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activities
are limited
and less effective or conducive.

Online
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learning
system
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activities
may be easy to do without coming to
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class
and can be
easily
accessed anywhere and at a predetermined time.
However
,
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activities
that
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must
be done
offline
are limited
,
for example
coming to
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class
, participating in organizational
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activities
, socializing and
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many
other
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activities
. With the
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online
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learning
system and technological advances that are
increasingly
developing,
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students
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have to
be in front of the screen all the time when there is Virtual via the
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google
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meet
application.

Online teaching and
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learning
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activities
are less effective or conducive in
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learning
,
for example
when the network of one lecturer or
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student
is unstable in a virtual
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meet
via the zoom or google meeting application, and when the lecturer gives research assignments that should
be done
with groups and business partners to build a business with
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meet
directly
.
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, not all
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students
have a
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good
network connection area and not all
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students
are in a
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good
financial situation, and should be able to socialize
directly
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but
cannot

The conclusion is that both lecturers and
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students
can
also
master technology more with the existence of an
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online
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learning
system which
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makes
time more flexible,
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but
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online
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learning
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makes
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activities
limited, such as socializing, and less effective or conducive
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because
not all
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students
have
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good
network connections. It would be better if
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learning
all academic
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activities
is carried
out offline,
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because
there are
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some
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activities
that require face-to-face
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learning
.
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IELTS essay After the pandemic is over, teaching and learning activities at universities must be carried out completely online

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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