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your experiences and feelings after the program

your experiences and feelings after the program Q5GRw

Last summer, I took part in a reality program and have a chance to experience activities for a day a poor family in a strange place. It was in June when the harvest time started. The reason I participated in the programme was because I want to challenge yourself with the jobs that I have never done. That day, I helped people there harvest their crops. When I first started I was very difficult for sickle and use it. More difficulty is to work under sunshine in the summer. After finish a work, i felt very tired but it so funny. Because i had one day to work hard, we get worthy result. Working with a poor family so happy because they are friendly and help me a lot. In short, I promised to study harder to get a better job because working on paddy fields was really hard and difficult.

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took part
 in a reality program and have a chance to experience activities for a day a poor family in a strange place. It was in June when the harvest time This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
. The reason I participated in the Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
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because
 I want to challenge yourself with the jobs that I have never done. That day, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
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people
 there harvest their crops. When I first
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started
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very
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use
 it. More difficulty is to work under sunshine in the summer. After finish a work, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
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very
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but
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it
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so
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funny
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 had one day to work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 worthy result. Working with a poor family This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 happy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are friendly and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me a lot. In short, I promised to study harder to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a better job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 working on paddy fields was really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 and difficult. 