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but I know the first step is to build a solid foundation.

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I just graduated with my degree in Bcom finance, and I’m excited to study at Anglia Ruskin University. My longer-term goals are to learn a variety of areas within the field of management and work toward deciding what area of specialization I want to take. I’d love to become an expert in one specific field of management in the long term, but I know the first step is to build a solid foundation. I choose Supply chain management because of the several opportunities available to the students of supply chain. It is one of the most trendy courses of today’s times and most demanded ones. A major chunk of students opt for this course just because of the numerous opportunities available to them. And I wish to obtain more knowledge in supply chain management and strategies.
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and work toward deciding what area of specialization I want to take. I’d
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to become an expert in one specific field of
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in the long term,
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step is to build a solid foundation.

I choose Supply chain
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of the several opportunities available to the students of supply chain. It is one of the most trendy courses of
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of the numerous opportunities available to them. And I wish to obtain more knowledge in supply chain
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IELTS essay but I know the first step is to build a solid foundation.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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