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Your company is having monthly meeting next week to look for some effective ways to improve teamwork among the staff. As a team leader, you are asked to discuss on teamwork in the working environment. You should talk about: 1. How often team work happens? 2. Advantages and disadvantages of teamwork 3. What kind of people may create problems in a team 4. How problems can be solved

Your company is having monthly meeting next week to look for some effective ways to improve teamwork among the staff. As a team leader, you are asked to discuss on teamwork in the working environment. You should talk about: 1. How often team work happens? 2. Advantages and disadvantages of teamwork 3. What kind of people may create problems in a team 4. How problems can be solved BYMpp
I want to talk about the topic of teamwork in the work environment. Teamwork is a group of 2-3 people or more working on a project, each person will be assigned different tasks to complete that project. The benefits of teamwork are creating relationships among team members, completing projects quickly, Gaining more knowledge and experience. The disadvantage of teamwork is conflict between members, having many ideas. The type of person who makes teamwork difficult is someone who has no sense of responsibility, doesn't get the job done, the solution is to talk about the work, if it doesn't work then don't work with them next time. This is what I think about teamwork.
I want to talk about the topic of
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in the
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environment.
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is a group of 2-3
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people
or more working on a project, each person will
be assigned
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different
tasks to complete that project. The benefits of
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teamwork
are creating relationships among team members, completing projects
quickly
, Gaining more knowledge and experience. The disadvantage of
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teamwork
is conflict between members, having
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many
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ideas
.
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The
type of person who
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makes
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teamwork
difficult is someone who has no sense of responsibility, doesn't
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get
the job done, the solution is to talk about the
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work
, if it doesn't
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work
then don't
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work
with them
next
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teamwork
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IELTS essay Your company is having monthly meeting next week to look for some effective ways to improve teamwork among the staff. As a team leader, you are asked to discuss on teamwork in the working environment. You should talk about: 1. How often team work happens? 2. Advantages and disadvantages of teamwork 3. What kind of people may create problems in a team 4. How problems can be solved

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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