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It is better to study abroad. Agree or disagree?

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Education is increasingly becoming accessable and is of prime importance among various democracies in society. In recent years, its quite prevalent the students are emigrating to first world countries in order to pursue higher education. This essay will examine the benefits and afects shaping postive develpment for both student body as well as host nation. Developed countries, catch the eyes of tons and tons of international students annually. Furthermore, students learn to shoulder their day-to-day responsibilities and live independently without any pressure from their families. Firstly, Degrees and education are not longer viewed as an liablility, but an investment to reap the fruit of action in the form of return on investment. Indeed, its eminent in the data collected by various universities depicting a record 56% increase in
Education is
increasingly
becoming
accessable
and is of prime importance among various democracies in society. In recent years, its quite prevalent the
students
are emigrating to
first
world countries in order to pursue higher education. This essay will examine the benefits and
afects
shaping
postive
develpment
for both
student
body
as well as
host nation.

Developed countries
, catch the eyes of tons and tons of international
students
annually
.
Furthermore
,
students
learn to shoulder their day-to-day responsibilities and
live
independently
without any pressure from their families.
Firstly
, Degrees and education are not longer viewed as
an
liablility
,
but
an investment to reap the fruit of action in the form of return on investment.
Indeed
, its eminent in the data collected by various universities depicting a record 56% increase in
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IELTS essay It is better to study abroad. Agree or disagree?

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  American English
2 paragraphs
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