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Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in a different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say: 1. how did you lose the certi v.1

Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in a different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say: 1. how did you lose the certi v. 1
In recent years, globalization has spawned human life in many terms; one of these is the usage of languages. Nowadays, certain languages are commonly used around the globe, while others are on the verge of extinction. I believe that the use of a few languages is advantageous not only for global unity but also for economic growth. The primary advantage of using global dialect is a union of people, globally. When people speak similar languages, they can easily exchange ideas with each other. Consequently, easy and hesitation free communication provides a sense of unity amongst the nations. For instance, the national cognitive research department proved that when two people have no language barrier, bondage between them becomes strong. This way people from different countries come closer. Furthermore, Speaking in a few tongues help in strong economical advancement. In everyday business, today the way of communication is email, chat, and Phone calls; a decrease in the language barrier allows the trader to communicate in a better way. For example, when one or two languages are popularly used in the world, business owners may develop their businesses in other countries, thereby bringing more benefits not only to entrepreneurs but also to local residents in the host country. The result will be steady growth in the general economy of all nations across the globe. However, declination of local languages has a negative effect on fashion; as languages define culture. So, loss of language may cause a loss cultural identity. But this is not a major problem and can be solved by educating people about the local fashion. To conclude, the aforementioned reasons such as nations' unity and growth of the economy, are positive results of this development. However, fear of culture loss is part of such progress which can be ameliorated via providing cultural knowledge to locals. So an increase in the use of certain languages is a positive development.
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use
of a few
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is advantageous not
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for global unity
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also
for economic growth.

The primary advantage of using global dialect is a union of
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people
, globally. When
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people
speak similar
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, they can
easily
exchange
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, the national cognitive research department proved that when two
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people
have no
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barrier, bondage between them becomes strong. This way
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in strong economical advancement. In everyday business,
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barrier
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the trader to communicate in a better way.
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, when one or two
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are
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used
in the world, business owners may develop their businesses in other countries, thereby bringing more benefits not
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to entrepreneurs
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residents in the host country. The result will be steady growth in the general economy of all nations across the globe.

However
, declination of
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local
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languages
has a
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negative
effect on fashion; as
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languages
define culture.
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, loss of
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language
may cause a loss cultural identity.
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But
this is not a major problem and can
be solved
by educating
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people
about the
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local
fashion.

To conclude
, the aforementioned reasons such as nations' unity and growth of the economy, are
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positive
results of this development.
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, fear of culture loss is part of such progress which can
be ameliorated
via providing cultural knowledge to
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locals
.
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an increase in the
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use
of certain
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languages
is a
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positive
development.
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IELTS essay Your company has sent you to attend a course at college in a different country. You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say: 1. how did you lose the certi v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
317 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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